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Beach

a hot burning sun
endless waves washing ashore...
gulls stealing french fries

a refreshing breeze
scores of sandcastle ruins...
a day at the beach

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Sam Kauffman

July 19, 2023 at 11:50 AM

O what wonderful memories your wonderful, image rich, haiku x2 brought back with the sounds, the smells, the sea and the sand of "a day at the beach!" This is so vividly rich! Congratulations on your win Emile! Blessings.

Emile Pinet

July 19, 2023 at 12:28 PM

Thank you, Sam; you have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

July 14, 2023 at 4:02 PM

I love a day like this. Thanks for the memories. Congrats

Emile Pinet

July 15, 2023 at 8:18 AM

Thanks, Andrea; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Kim Merryman

July 12, 2023 at 6:43 PM

I love the vivid images in your haiku, Emile! A picture perfect beach scene! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Emile Pinet

July 13, 2023 at 8:41 AM

Thanks, Kim; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 12, 2023 at 9:48 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Emile :) - hugs

Emile Pinet

July 12, 2023 at 10:11 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise; as always, I appreciate your support, my friend; Emile.

Tania Kitchin

July 12, 2023 at 5:46 AM

Emile, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful set of haiku's, love the "gulls stealing french fries"!

Emile Pinet

July 12, 2023 at 8:29 AM

Thanks, Tania; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 30, 2023 at 12:34 PM

Hello Emile, a lot of people go to the beach . yes the seagulls do steal the french fries from us when we are not looking. they are alwaus looking for food. My friend, enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 1, 2023 at 10:24 AM

Hello Emile, It is nice to see you again. You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Emile Pinet

July 1, 2023 at 7:49 AM

Thanks, Darlene, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Sara Kendrick

June 28, 2023 at 11:50 AM

Reads like a fun day. I wonder if you came away with a little sunburn. Sara

Emile Pinet

June 28, 2023 at 12:35 PM

Thanks, Sara, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 28, 2023 at 10:16 AM

- A lovely day, Emile :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Emile Pinet

June 28, 2023 at 10:45 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, as always, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Jan Allison

June 28, 2023 at 9:53 AM

we both wrote beach themed poems - great minds think alike Emile:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx wish I'd thought of the french fries line lol

Emile Pinet

June 28, 2023 at 9:59 AM

Thanks, Jan, I take, " great minds think alike " as a compliment; my friend, Emile.

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