Be To Become

to transcend mind, we leave thoughts behind
so we make no allusion to prevent confusion
liken it to the beauteous blossoming of a rose
requiring surrender by head and heart fusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buhagiar Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 1:52 AM
Surrender to the rose. Famous words for me. We tend to have an explanation for all mysteries of creation. A useless feat. No one can understand the mysteries of creation, no one can replicate them. Blessings.
Seeker Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Yes indeed
Empress Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 1:30 AM
“Beauteous blossoming of a rose” i love that line the most. A deep and heartfelt write as always. Brilliant
Seeker Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Thank you, IE
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