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"BE THE DAWN" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 15 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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Be the Dawn

Be the dawn my love 

Shed the light into my heart

Everlasting bliss!






 © Demetrios Trifiatis
          15 July 2017

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John Fleming

August 14, 2017 at 2:56 AM

Beautifully expressed, Professor...beautifully expressed! My very warmest regards! :) john P.s I was not aware, until now, that you are indeed a Professor---You have my respect, Sir!

Gary Bateman

July 28, 2017 at 4:14 PM

Hallo Herr Professor!! Demetrios, Dein Haiku hier ist beide ganz toll und bescriblich!! The linkage of love, heart, and bliss says it all. Love is at the base of everything. Muy Excellente!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 29, 2017 at 5:17 PM

Danke mein freund, Gary! Thank you my friend, for taking the time to visit and express your appreciation by favoring my humble Haiku!

Probir Gupta

July 16, 2017 at 9:29 AM

Dawn of your Love ... Wonderful expression ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 16, 2017 at 10:24 AM

Thank you my friend, Probir for visiting me again! It is so nice!

Maria Williams

July 16, 2017 at 1:58 AM

You are such a romantic soul my dear Demetrios - a beautiful thought encased in a perfect Haiku. I better Fave this...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 16, 2017 at 7:39 AM

Well, I admit my... crime dearest Maria! Haha. Of course my age doesn't allow it very often but from time to time I feel like writing something romantic! thank you for your lovely visit! Congratulations for POTD!

Eve Roper

July 15, 2017 at 8:13 PM

Nice , the Dawn will always shine in your heart:-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 16, 2017 at 7:39 AM

Thank you so much dear Soul! You so kind dear, Eve!

Elizabeth Kinch

July 15, 2017 at 3:45 PM

And another lovely write Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:48 PM

Glad you liked it dear, Elizabeth! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 15, 2017 at 2:46 PM

- A marvel poem, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:49 PM

Happy to know that it is to your liking dear friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for lovely comment! Hugs!

M. L. Kiser

July 15, 2017 at 1:07 PM

A beautifully done haiku.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:50 PM

My friend, M.L. Kiser, so good to see you! Thank you so much for your dear visit and comment!

Silent One

July 15, 2017 at 10:58 AM

Sounds like bliss my friend..

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:52 PM

What a lovely surprise my dear friend , Silent One! So good to have you back! You were missed! Thank you for your precious visit and comment!

Russell Sivey

July 15, 2017 at 7:30 AM

This poem sheds everlasting bliss into my heart just by the incredible senses I get from it! You have delighted me with the feelings of love within this delightful and loving poem my friend! Thank you for sharing it with us all! I rally enjoyed reading this wondrous piece this morning, and a lovely morning it is! Great Work!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 10:19 AM

IT IS REALLY SO GOOD TO SEE YOU after so long my friend, Russell! It reminds me of the "old days" when you and I commented on each others poetry! Hope you are alright and to see you soon! You are missed my friend! Thank you so much!

Supraja Kannan

July 15, 2017 at 7:26 AM

Uplifting one... Thanks for sharing the wise monoku and the Beautiful flower...

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 10:16 AM

Thank you dearest, Supraja, for your delightful visit and comment!

Joanna Daniel

July 15, 2017 at 6:13 AM

Encouraging words of love, brother:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 6:43 AM

Well, love is full of hope my little sister! Love knows no limits or insurmountable hurdles but it must be true and must be a two way street! Thank you for your loving visit and comment dearest, Jo!

Heidi Sands

July 15, 2017 at 5:44 AM

Wow Demetrios. I am so happy I came to see this. What a beautiful flower and uplifting poem!! I am saving this to favorites and it is a great way to start the day . Thank you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 6:04 AM

Happy to see you dearest, Heidi and happy you liked the poem and the flower! Thank you so much for your lovely visit!

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