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Be Still For a Moment

Be still for a moment And put down your burden Right here by My feet, dear Close your eyes, have no fear. Be still for a moment In the evening silence Listen; open your ears Sounds of music to hear. Be still for a moment Hear the wind's soft lament It's the sound of My voice Trying to breach the void. Be still for a moment And hear the bird's lament Cries for his mate, missing As you I am missing. Be still for a moment Smell the sweetest fragrance Of blooms in the wind's blows It is My love that flows. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 07.07.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/14/2010 6:49:00 AM
Such fluidity and vibrant imagery in these lines Caroline.. forgive me for the C.C. .. did not mean to assume it did not matter to u... sorry.. and hope u are having a wonderful poetic day.. with luv..
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:27:00 PM
God this is really nice ; it's a meditation!
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:32:00 AM
A very comforting piece, we sometimes forget to enjoy the stillness.. Love Wilma
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:46:00 PM
lovely poem
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:28:00 PM
This is so comforting, Caroline. It reflects your compassionate nature so well. Goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:21:00 PM
nice one,, this was a lovely write on how the love still lingers,, enjoyed...P.D.
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