Be Safe With Me

each place in time
holds fast and true
when I look across the room to you
our thoughts are one
I know what you are
how you think
what's next
a secret from the rest of mankind
we have our ways 
you and I
we have our ways.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Joseph Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 6:00 PM
yes derrick, I am talking about my true love and soul mate. Good catch...thank you for the compliment.
Burton Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 5:36 PM
:) love this poetry and I am not just saying that. Sounds like you are talking about your soulmate.. could be wrong and if so... my bad! enjoy your day.
Strand Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Veronica.Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:41 PM
Veronica this poem flowed like a mountain stream - you just never know where it is going to end up - Love the mystery in this piece - very well done - God Bless, MJ
Arteaga Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:04 PM
nice rhyme rhythm is felt here, and a good closing by repeating.
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