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Be Safe With Me

each place in time holds fast and true when I look across the room to you our thoughts are one I know what you are how you think what's next a secret from the rest of mankind we have our ways you and I we have our ways.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/5/2009 6:00:00 PM
yes derrick, I am talking about my true love and soul mate. Good catch...thank you for the compliment.
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Date: 8/5/2009 5:36:00 PM
:) love this poetry and I am not just saying that. Sounds like you are talking about your soulmate.. could be wrong and if so... my bad! enjoy your day.
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Date: 8/5/2009 8:35:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Veronica.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:41:00 PM
Veronica this poem flowed like a mountain stream - you just never know where it is going to end up - Love the mystery in this piece - very well done - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:04:00 PM
nice rhyme rhythm is felt here, and a good closing by repeating.
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