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It took me awhile to comprehend 
  the true significance of "be patient."
     We've heard it all before,
        but it's funny how we often fail
           to cogitate over this phrase
              and feel it's ponderous weight.
                 One who says it to you means well, 
                    not playing the pontificating fool, 
                       but hanging a priceless jewel
                          over your head so you wear 
                             the advice like a necklace.
                                So please listen to whomever 
                                 advises you to "be patient."
                                  It's arguably the two most 
                                  important words you could ever hear.
                                It'd take me a mighty long day
                               to list all that I've learned 
                             from this simple phrase.
                          It's common sense, stripped naked, 
                        made to dance in a cold rain.
                     Yes, my friend, be patient,
                  when wading back into 
                the murky creek of love and romance.
              Be patient as you chase 
            your rainbow. Don't move too fast!
          You'll get to that pot of gold.
        Do not be discouraged.
     Be patient when on life's highway
   lest you crash! Good things 
come to those who wait.


Date written: 01/17/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/17/2021 1:00:00 PM
Patience is hard but worth the wait. Yes!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2021 2:28:00 PM
I wholehearted concur, Kim:-)
Date: 1/17/2021 12:30:00 PM
Hello Edward, I just read your poem. I read this poem several time and I like what it says. Yes good things come to those who wait. I believe that. My fav. God bless.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/18/2021 3:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for the FAV, Darlene:-) Much appreciated.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2021 3:17:00 PM
Hello Edward, made it my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2021 12:56:00 PM
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this one, Darlene:-)

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