Be Open:Live

You                                                                                                                                                                                      
do                                                                                                                                                                            
not know                                                                                                                                                                                         
A flower                                                                                                                                                                                     
until you feel it.                                                                                                                                                                                
You won’t feel that flower until                                                                                                                                                                    
it touches you. It won’t touch you until you let it.   
Be,act,feel,learn,know,be open. Live life. it won't touch you until you let it. let it.


Fibonacci Challenge
written Jan 7, 2019
Sponsor Dear Heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Love how you ended it : LET IT. So nice this message, Robert!!
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Rob, I love the message you have conveyed in this well-penned fibonacci and I think Dear Heart will like it as well. I did two verses and the second is similar in intent to yours. At first I thought this form might be intimidating, but it was fairly easy. Sending winning wishes your way for the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Uniquely done. Good luck in the contest.
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