Be My Valentine

be my valentine
my purple heart pants for you
karate belt too



Written February 4, 2019                                   Contest: Valentine Senryu
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 5:14 PM
what a fun poem Caren! Congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Congrats, Caren, on a SUPER win
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Thank you my friend.
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Great Senryu, Caren, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate it.
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 1:00 PM
- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate it.
Y. Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Hi Caren, Congratulations on your win and poem of the day! Both were well deserved:-) Alexis
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Thank you Alexis Y. A great day. Anniversary of my bike wreck week, replaced by goodness now!
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Congrats Caren, POTD and a great win, time for some wine I think. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:58 PM
If I drank I would be in my cups, Tom.
Gilmour Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:29 AM
haha, many congrats Caren. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:58 PM
I am beyond words Ann. A great day!
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:05 AM
Ha Ha, loved the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:07 AM
Thank you Tania. It was so much fun to write!
Mcferran Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Love it!!! ;D
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:07 AM
Wink. Wink. I knew you would, Soul Sister!
Cunningham Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:33 AM
Haha great senyru Caren, love your last line. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your visit.
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 3:40 PM
ha!! So cute.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:01 PM
I am glad you "got it". Ha!
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Oh, that's really cute. Good luck in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Thank you my faithful friend.
Y. Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Hi Caren, This is just adorable. Funny too. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I didn't know you were a painter. How can I view your paintings?
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:12 AM
My granddaughter begged me to paint with her about 5 years ago. I now have over 200 paintings; they cover three rooms of my house. We are trying to attach them to the trees outside. I love neons, and glitter, and I am FAST! My husband says I paint like an assembly line of elves.
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:32 AM
- A sweet one, Caren :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I was on a little "roll" here. No pun intended.
Rose  Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 5:46 AM
Ah, your a swift one, By the way I have been loving your paintings, I have been putting words to them. I have two of them posted on my face book page. Please have a look, Let me know if its ok, I hope you don't mind, Your art brings out the writer in me, xo
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 6:59 AM
I do not mind in the least. I share all of my stuff. Am I your facebook friend? Are you Pixie Dust there? Soupmail me please.
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