Be My Panda

The way a little kid glances at a toy
Is the way I look at you. 
The boy at a remote control car with the look of joy
The girl at the doll not looking away, eyes on it like glue
They want to scream and shout
Until they have it in their grasp
They look to the left
They look to the right
They think of theft 
They want to put up a fight
They see it as beauty. 
It is truly. 
You are my toy.
Don't let that figure trick you, it's only a speech decoy
You are my panda 
Take me by the hand and be the toy I am proud to flaunt
One of a kind you are to me, come and be my taunt
They will not have you, in my arms you'll be
Smile on your face full of grace 
Lights up the room with glee
Your laugh leaving behind a trace
Of your presence. Adding so much excitement, 
leaving my heart in a race.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/2/2014 2:22:00 AM
Hi Jesus, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 6/18/2014 9:27:00 AM
Excellent write, Jesus! Bravo! I enjoyed reading your work.
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Date: 6/18/2014 4:03:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jesus :) - I choose your first very well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2014 1:00:00 AM
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Date: 6/17/2014 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :) I remember when my wife was my panda.
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Date: 6/17/2014 12:06:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, JR. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/17/2014 7:07:00 AM
Hello JR, Welcome to Poetry Soup, you have joined a family of great thinkers who will speak to your heart, encourage you and enjoy your talent I will definitely be among those who will not stop to read your work Hope this journey will lead you to your goal As for your first poem, I love it … welcome to the sweet side of the world Your new PS friend .… R. Roger. C
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:45:00 AM
Hi Jesus,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:22:00 AM
Jesus, most enjoyed. A sweet, loving poem, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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