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Be My Love

Will you be my love? Together we`ll build a nest of dove. We`ll have couple of kids And bring up them all the days and nights. I will be yours you will be mine We will wander together and dine. From hills to valleys and bines to fines. We`ll cross black hole and the forbidden lines. Oh! My lady, silently come. Let surrounding be deaf and dumb. Stand frontward and hold your tongue. Let the critic keep mum.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/30/2017 6:02:00 AM
Oh! My lady, silently come. Let surrounding be deaf and dumb. Stand frontward and hold your tongue. Let the critic keep mum.
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Date: 10/12/2017 8:57:00 PM
A beautifully romantic poem Sohrab. Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/11/2017 11:05:00 PM
Very nicely done, Sohrab.
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:24:00 AM
A requiem for a love so true. Keep up the good work.
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Sohrab Rustom
Date: 10/4/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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