Be Encouraged (Septolet)

Run!
My son,
The long race.
Be encouraged!

And be strong.
Not swift,
Go!



Comments:  The Septolet poem has seven lines with a total of fourteen words.  It 
has two parts with a break between each part.  This one has a syllable count 
pattern of 1,2,3,4,3,2,1. The same thought and picture is portrayed in both parts 
for a complete picture.  This Septolet is about enduring to the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Hi Joseph - I sure do miss you Joseph - You are such a fine teacher I do miss that - I never knew that a septolet had a break in the middle - I just want to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this last week – I do hope that everything is ok between you and those who share your heart Joseph - God Bless, MJ
Mckenzie Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 7:59 PM
Very interesting style of poetry of course a master of the art! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
Tugaff Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 7:33 AM
Hello Joseph, I like this style of poem. It's very challenging. The message is so vivid, well crafter poem. Congratulations my friend. Ernilando
Degenhardt Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Joseph, congratulations on the feature of this piece. This offers the advice to a son that helps him become a man, a succesful man. Very well penned. Michael
Austin Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Great advice. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Augustus Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Very interesting poetry form with a great message! Congratulations on getting your poem featured.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations Joseph on your septolet being featured. Another learning experience for me. God Bless. Vince
Santiago Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 9:28 AM
Congrats Joseph on your featured... encouraging septolet, bravo! Ernesto
Mason Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 3:03 PM
You are such a teacher, Joseph!! Thanks for this very interesting new (to me anyway) form of writing. Congratulations on this being selected as a feature this week at the Soup!
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Joseph fasinating. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Awesome form and excellent featured write! Warmest congrats Joseph! Miss you! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 11:51 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Joseph Rgds Brian
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