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Be a Winner - Eternal Promise

~ Be A Winner~ 
(Eternal Promise) 


You shouldn't concentrate in what's wrong 
But try to dwell more in what's good 
You'll reap more as you go along 
Do what's right as you know you should 
God wants you to be a winner 
Choose not to live like a sinner 

But try to dwell more in what's good 
Do what's right as you know you should 

Empty your mind of all the trash 
Nothing great amounts when living wild 
You'll just fall hard with a big splash 
So turn 'round don't act like a child 
You don't have to follow the crowd 
God want us humble and not proud 

Nothing great amounts when living wild 
So turn 'round don't act like a child 

Repent, give your life to the Lord 
Everything will turn 'round you'll see 
You will learn God's word is a sword 
God, love, faith, hope, are the right key 
To live better life not be blue 
Keep your feet on the ground be you 

Everything will turn 'round you'll see 
God, love, faith, hope, are the right key. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2012 


September.6.2015 


"Eternal Promise" is a poetry style, created by Christina R. Jussaume on 10/18/2009.

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Darlene Gifford September 7, 2015 at 9:18 AM Loved your billboards for Jesus and your sound Biblical advice. Keep your feet on the ground (and your head and heart on Jesus). A 7. And thanks for reading my salvation poem....Blessings, Darlene Dorian Petersen Potter September 9, 2015 at 7:00 PM Again thank you for the 7, Darlene!:) Dorian Petersen Potter September 9, 2015 at 6:57 PM Thank you ever so kindly Darlene,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it, nice to see you again. Glad that you liked my spiritual, inspirational poem and the graphics I chose for it:)Thanks for the 7 too!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D Darlene Gifford September 7, 2015 at 9:20 AM P.S. Forgot to check the 7. But now it's there.

Diane Christian September 6, 2015 at 10:34 AM lovely poem Dorian Petersen Potter September 13, 2015 at 4:33 PM Thank you ever so kindly Diane,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs September 6, 2015 at 8:55 AM Very nice poem, and great advice Dorian Petersen Potter September 13, 2015 at 4:34 PM Thank you ever so kindly Gwen,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much:) Glad you liked it.I'll stop by your place very soon.Thanks again for your visit:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D