Be a Floating Feather

Floating Feather
Resisting Winds’ flow
Journeying freely
Spiraling swirling spinning sideways
Light enjoyable 
Pushing away Wind

Wind is strong

Feather falling frantically 
Doomed downward
Spiraling swirling spinning sideways
Heavy troubled

Spring free from the grip of Wind

Spiraling swirling spinning sideways
Light enjoyable
Finally floating free
Floating Feather stays floating forever 
Without Wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 3, 2009 at 3:52 PM
I LOVE IT ALLI!! This is a great poem!! You really nailed it! Love ya always Jen
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October 21, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Amazing Alli. This is truly fasinating. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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