Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Battleaxe

Hilda shut him out of her life,

with combative tongue and hot air.

Gunther launched her, off topmost stair,

shut the lid on his battleaxe wife.


4/24/2022
Killing With an Epigram
Sponsor: Margarita Lillico


Hilda: Maid of battle
Gunther: Battle Warrior
Battleaxe: sharp-tongued, domineering

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Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2022 at 7:55 PM big congrats. well deserved win Kim Rodrigues June 2, 2022 at 8:11 PM Thank you, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2022 at 8:21 AM A dark one and humorous. Love it. Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2022 at 8:47 PM Thank you! Glad you found the humor, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger April 29, 2022 at 6:09 AM I think there are many relationships like this, and it is sad. Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2022 at 8:46 PM Truly!

Gershon Wolf April 25, 2022 at 8:52 PM At least she didn't drive Gunther's new Porsche off a cliff! ~ Mixed Emotions Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 9:05 PM Quite a dysfunctional couple!

Regina Mcintosh April 25, 2022 at 2:41 PM Wow. LOL. Good one. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 9:01 PM Thanks! Glad you found this funny!

Silpika Kalita April 25, 2022 at 12:26 AM Absolutely loving this, unique, metaphoric and creatively creative. Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 3:41 AM Thank you, my friend!

Victor Buhagiar April 24, 2022 at 10:48 PM I see blood flowing. Call 911. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 3:41 AM Haha! Hugs ~ Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 24, 2022 at 9:29 PM Wow! I couldn't think of anything for this contest, but you nailed it, Kim. This was so fun to read. :D Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 3:41 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Eve Roper April 24, 2022 at 6:42 PM hahaha... this is so funny. Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 3:44 AM Thank you, Eve! So glad you found funny! Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2022 at 3:41 AM Thank you, Eve! So glad you found funny!