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"8 Mile Style Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Nick Trim

5/31/2018

Battle Rap

Yo, do you want to know why I rap better than you 
My Man, let me tell you somethings that are true
 
All you do is sing about whatever or when 
But I do my singing from the tip of my pen
 
Yo, and you talk like you're all that 
All you sing are words like **** and shat
 
You really only talk the song, and most words you botch 
Probably because you forget when you grab your own crotch
 
Yo, you sing of gangs or a dude with a gun 
My man, I sing of stars the moon and the sun
 
You dress in clothes like half-assed pants 
I dress in clothes that'll make you dance
 
Yo, you flash around all your jewels of gold 
My man, they're probably all fake, so I've been told
 
I sing with class, spark and style 
And I can walk with the best "8-Mile"
 
Yo, so isn't it time we put all this rap crap to rest 
My man, just admit it, I rap the best
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Sietesantos Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Ooooh! Hot rap! Love your style! You're great, bro! Now I have to give this contest a go - LOL! Good luck in the contest! Hugs. Pandita
Messina Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Uh oh! I'm in trouble now LOL Thank you Pandita, nice of you to stop by. Go baby go...have fun with it I'm sure it will be awesome! Best of luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie :)
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 12:26 PM
- :))) ... I have to admit I'm really bad at rap ..... very well done, Charles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:08 PM
LOL...Nah, you are probably better than you think at it...thanks Sunshine, Hugs // Charlie :)
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