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"8 Mile Style Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Nick Trim

5/31/2018

Yo, do you want to know why I rap better than you My Man, let me tell you somethings that are true All you do is sing about whatever or when But I do my singing from the tip of my pen Yo, and you talk like you're all that All you sing are words like **** and shat You really only talk the song, and most words you botch Probably because you forget when you grab your own crotch Yo, you sing of gangs or a dude with a gun My man, I sing of stars the moon and the sun You dress in clothes like half-assed pants I dress in clothes that'll make you dance Yo, you flash around all your jewels of gold My man, they're probably all fake, so I've been told I sing with class, spark and style And I can walk with the best "8-Mile" Yo, so isn't it time we put all this rap crap to rest My man, just admit it, I rap the best

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Date: 6/2/2018 9:58:00 AM
Ooooh! Hot rap! Love your style! You're great, bro! Now I have to give this contest a go - LOL! Good luck in the contest! Hugs. Pandita
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/2/2018 10:39:00 AM
Uh oh! I'm in trouble now LOL Thank you Pandita, nice of you to stop by. Go baby go...have fun with it I'm sure it will be awesome! Best of luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie :)
Date: 5/31/2018 12:26:00 PM
- :))) ... I have to admit I'm really bad at rap ..... very well done, Charles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 5/31/2018 1:08:00 PM
LOL...Nah, you are probably better than you think at it...thanks Sunshine, Hugs // Charlie :)

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