Battered Shells

Battered Shells

Standing lonely in a crowd
Feelings severed, screaming loud;
Heart rejected, growing cold
Trusting ways begin to fold

Waking eyes find life revealed,
Wonder when the dirge was pealed;
Love was captured, tears ran wild
From the young but learning child

Finding life like solitaire
Some that need but none that care,
Most that take but none that give
All that die and none that live

Reaching out to no one there
Leaving all your feelings bare;
Soon to nothing they will grind
Leaving but a shell behind

Looking ’round this empty sea
Battered shells stand facing me,
Standing near but none in reach
Each alone on private beach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Farley Iv Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 5:21 PM
What a captivating poem! Loved the comparison of a lost soul to a battered shell on a private beach. -Patrick Farley IV
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 5:01 PM
awesome write, my friend - your poems are always a pleasure to read and then read again
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Amazing poem. My favorite line by far is the second line of the second stanza. Wow, You know how much I love word play and your choice of the word "pealed" is once again genius. I absolutely love how you can find the right word. i.e. ...........pealed - brings visions of the melancholy sounds of a funeral hymn ..........peeled - brings visions of a bitter fruit opened to release a funeral hymn. Great work!
Bauer Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:09 AM
congratulations on a well-deserved win. this poem is filled with feelings and i like your use of rhyme. great final couplet!
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Terry just a quick congrats on your win..David
Collins Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Oh Terry, this is so disheartening. "Finding life like solitaire" Glad it got a win. love, Kathy
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Heart wrenching! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tsiluma Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Whoa Terry, This is ...this is heartbreaking. Loneliness at its best - trust standing in a crowd to remind you how alone you really feel! Very nice rhyme Terry! Congrats!
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July 16, 2012 at 10:29 AM
Terry, I feel it, I know it, I live it.....Congrats on win....very very nice!!
Brown Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on the win in the new poet (Only) 2012 contest Terry. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem winning.
Gooden Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Terry congrats. Good work.
A   Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:15 AM
Terry, lol... Carol beat me here...congratulations with your win in my contest...pd
Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Terry. Love, Carol
Puddifoot Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 5:16 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, this lovely poem has great rhyme and flow :-)
Williams Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:41 AM
Terry congrats on your win..David
Nair Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 5:44 PM
deep and intense..enjoyed..Congrats on the win, ..:) Jag
Hunter Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 4:34 PM
Very nice! Congrats!
Arowolo Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Congrats ,Terry.Great write..Wonderful rhyme..
Wesley Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 10:13 AM
Fantastic rhythm and rhyme in this wonderful verse. Congratulations are in order for your win! :)
A   Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 9:22 AM
TERRY.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:58 PM
very profound write..yet we must remember we can grasp the out thrust hand of another too ;) Light & Love
Horsman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 8:16 AM
Such profoundness, Terry. wonderful to read, enjoyed. harry
Guzzi Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 3:17 PM
The sea an endless source of poetry! Light & Love
Collins Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Terry - Such a longing in your words. "Finding life like solitaire" is brilliant. Please write more. love, Kathy
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