Battered and Worn

Soar through the night sky
Ye Starlings with tattered wings.
Paradise awaits!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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James Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 2:27 AM
fantasic Haiku. And also thank yyou for supporting my contest.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:57 PM
great write, I am having a hard time with it.
Chircop Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Goooooodddddd onnnnnnnneeeeeeeee indeed.Keep the pen flowing..Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Excellent my friend and should definitely place in the winners circle... great title too...good luck ...my entry is "Flight"... what else? luv.. someone just commented on our Heaveny Valentine Rose poem a few minutes ago.. a newbie at that... still has impact...thought u would like to know... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Trevino Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Sweet!
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