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Battered and Worn

Soar through the night sky Ye Starlings with tattered wings. Paradise awaits!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/11/2010 2:27:00 AM
fantasic Haiku. And also thank yyou for supporting my contest.
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:57:00 PM
great write, I am having a hard time with it.
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:40:00 PM
Goooooodddddd onnnnnnnneeeeeeeee indeed.Keep the pen flowing..Charma
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:18:00 PM
Always hope for a brighter day. Nice write Thanks, Rick~~~~~~~~Salem,Oregon
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Date: 4/8/2010 1:10:00 PM
Excellent my friend and should definitely place in the winners circle... great title too...good luck ...my entry is "Flight"... what else? luv.. someone just commented on our Heaveny Valentine Rose poem a few minutes ago.. a newbie at that... still has impact...thought u would like to know... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/8/2010 12:47:00 PM
Sweet!
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