Bathroom Floor

sitting here on the bathroom floor
trying to find the courage to do it once more
feeling too weak to reach that far
can't seem to make it to the car
to drive to that place high in the sky
so i will no longer feel sad and cry
laying here on the bathroom floor
found the courage to do it once more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Tsitsikroni Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 1:55 PM
To comment is difficult here becasue this poem reads, pain, anguish and self Harm. Hope it's just poem. Reach out if you need help. Well done on expressing how one would feel, how you perhaps feel. Welcome to the soup.
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August 2, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Makama Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 10:50 AM
What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup
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