Basement

Stillborn static cry
Smothered screeching granite knife
Crimson chalk demise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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February 28, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Yikes! Sounds pretty scary to me. The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in a creative way. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Karen
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