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Baseline

Beneath bickering brass, bluebirds balance beats on baritone branches.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2025 8:21:00 AM

i like the musicality of your work, aaliyah...so engaging! grateful you entered my contest and won a special placement!

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 6/3/2025 5:17:00 PM

Thank you so much. I’m thrilled to hear the musicality came through—that means a lot. I’m grateful for the opportunity to enter your contest and honoured by the special placement. Truly appreciated.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/31/2025 3:57:00 PM

Gorgeous fit for this contest.

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 6/3/2025 5:16:00 PM

Thank you very much. I’m glad it resonated with the contest’s spirit. I really appreciate your kind words.