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Bartholomew and Clare

Gather round all you little kiddies Got a story I'd like to share Bout a tiny mouse named Bartholomew And a dirty big bear called Clare! Now Clare wasn't the least bit happy His name sounded a wee bit girly Had a wee mousey friend Bartholomew Who's name sounded strong and burly! So hulking big Clare the unhappy bear Asked his mousy friend Bartholomew If he'd be so kind and wouldn't mind Switching names, that'd be so cool! Bartholomew said he wanted some time To check with dear Cynthia his friend About this idea of switching names On her opinion he would depend! Cynthia said, “If you want my opinion Your name doesn't sound like a bear But if Clare wants the name Bartholomew We're still friends but now you'll be Clare!” A name doesn't change the person you are You'll be the same friend in the end So forever after Mr. Bartholomew Bear And wee mousey Clare stayed friends! A moral?

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Date: 5/23/2022 8:42:00 AM
I loved this story, Jack. It is so true. No matter what, a leopard does not change its spots. I'll always be me, no matter by what name I am called...and I've been called a few!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/23/2022 9:43:00 AM
So you've been called naughty names! LOL! Ah knew it! How's your day?
Date: 5/23/2022 6:35:00 AM
It's a great story, Jack! Identity is kind of like the icing on a cake, it can make us more outwardly genuine, but it has no bearing on the cake.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/23/2022 7:34:00 AM
Great response my friend! But it has no baring on who we are! However if we are Mickey M. Mouse that could have an impact! Thanks a bunch Michael!
Date: 5/23/2022 5:49:00 AM
A nice happy ending Jack, boys and girls are a bit mixed up these days so anything goes. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/23/2022 5:58:00 AM
The old stories don't apply anymore! Oh well... happy day Sir Thomas!

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