Barriers

They went around them,
barriers warning of risk
and now they drowned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Sadly, it's true. One can understand them, however. The necessity for survival can force someone to overlook a different kind of danger just to flee the danger they know. PS. Maybe this is a senryu?
Tidd Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Still haiku as far as I know, 5/7/5 syllables.
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