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They went around them, barriers warning of risk and now they drowned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 10/7/2015 11:29:00 AM
Sadly, it's true. One can understand them, however. The necessity for survival can force someone to overlook a different kind of danger just to flee the danger they know. PS. Maybe this is a senryu?
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Jim Tidd
Date: 10/7/2015 11:35:00 AM
Still haiku as far as I know, 5/7/5 syllables.