Barren

in the pre-dawn hours
tears fall from a needy soul
pangs of emptiness


April 23, 2025.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Dear Thompson, your haiku captures the emotional pain of longing and loneliness so soulfully. Poignant moments of sorrow and anguish experienced in the the dark, quiet hours deep into the night. Quite moving. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Emate Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 11:43 PM
Thank you, Susan, for stopping by. Blessings.
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