Barn Swallow and Barn Owl

the barn swallow swoops
onto a large hay bale
startling the owl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 3:59 AM
a moment captured ~ precious
Krutsinger Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Thank you Line
Foster Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Perfect. Ann
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November 10, 2019 at 3:14 AM
Thank you Ann.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 9:44 AM
This is so good, I can picture the scene. Blessings Rick.
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November 10, 2019 at 3:15 AM
Thank you Richard. My best friend has a barn owl.
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Easy to picture it, Caren. I really like both kinds of birds.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 3:54 AM
I love them too.
Bavington  Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 6:30 PM
The things we see in the moment are the best poems ever written. Your imagery is darn good.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 3:55 AM
Thank you Bette. My best friend has her first barn owl ever.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 4:32 PM
Love this! Did this happen for real or in your imagination? Either way a surprise! Nice!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 4:00 AM
Part both.
Sands Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Great one Caren. I love to see them :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 4:00 AM
I think birds are fun to watch.
Gauthier Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Lovely imagery, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 4:00 AM
Thank you Line.
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November 8, 2019 at 6:18 AM
A wonderful Haiku. Blessings and love, Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Gina.
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