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Barn Swallow and Barn Owl

the barn swallow swoops
onto a large hay bale
startling the owl

8th grade9th gradehaiku

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/17/2021 3:59:00 AM

a moment captured ~ precious

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2021 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Line

Ann Foster

Date: 11/9/2019 10:57:00 AM

Perfect. Ann

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/10/2019 3:14:00 AM

Thank you Ann.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2019 9:44:00 AM

This is so good, I can picture the scene. Blessings Rick.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/10/2019 3:15:00 AM

Thank you Richard. My best friend has a barn owl.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2019 7:36:00 PM

Easy to picture it, Caren. I really like both kinds of birds.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2019 3:54:00 AM

I love them too.

Bette Bavington

Date: 11/8/2019 6:30:00 PM

The things we see in the moment are the best poems ever written. Your imagery is darn good.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2019 3:55:00 AM

Thank you Bette. My best friend has her first barn owl ever.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2019 4:32:00 PM

Love this! Did this happen for real or in your imagination? Either way a surprise! Nice!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2019 4:00:00 AM

Part both.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/8/2019 3:08:00 PM

Great one Caren. I love to see them :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2019 4:00:00 AM

I think birds are fun to watch.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/8/2019 2:40:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2019 4:00:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/8/2019 6:18:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku. Blessings and love, Gina

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/8/2019 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Gina.

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