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Barely

my soul dies alil each day when its found false and delay something missing something yearning and its just another day like a dead corpse not living im just a shell barely breathing not much left nside to keep me alive im pretty much empty doubt if one can save the pain that has dug my grave this evil cold feeling dawn to dead i so dread as i lie here barely living

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2011 10:51:00 AM
you sound very young, just beginning. jhl
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:46:00 PM
air it out!!! this poem shows your inkin' your thoughts dear poet!!!! keep it up!!!! jimbo
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