barefoot childhood

nothing hurt barefoot more than legos left unattended
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 10:52 PM
So true—and wonderfully funny! This tiny monoku instantly brings back a universal childhood pain, told with perfect deadpan simplicity.
Croft Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 6:39 AM
no matter how much you tell your kids to pick up the legos, there's always one that is forgotten!
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:14 PM
Quite a statement there...I guess not!
Croft Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 6:40 AM
if not legos it was army men!
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