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Barefoot

Behold A voice announces Release me Expose me to the elements Free me from fungus Outdoors Over cool ticklish grass, warm grainy sidewalks, and prankish pebbles Time to rejoice

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/12/2024 6:57:00 PM

Enjoyed this one. It's nice to stretch the feet.

David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2024 7:13:00 PM

Glad you liked it Hilda, and agreed!

David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2024 7:12:00 PM

Agreed!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/12/2024 10:03:00 AM

Lovely the next to last line! Sounds so inviting!

David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2024 7:11:00 PM

Thanks Kim. I'm reliving the joy of running around barefoot like I did as a kid all summer long each summer I hope to develop thick calluses on my feet :-)