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Barefoot

she walks barefoot waves rise and recede endless succession of tides silver of stippled crests watchful eyes of moon crests stippled of silver tides of succession endless recede and rise waves barefoot walks she

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Date: 12/21/2020 9:05:00 AM
Took me a minute to figure it out. I was about to ask about the repetition, when I noticed its reversal theme. Quite ingenious.
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Date: 8/1/2020 4:25:00 AM
Very clever write, Mike.
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Date: 7/31/2020 2:05:00 PM
very nice. I like how it reverses!
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