Barefoot

she walks barefoot
waves rise and recede
endless succession of tides
silver of stippled crests
watchful eyes of moon
crests stippled of silver
tides of succession endless
recede and rise waves
barefoot walks she
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Levasseur Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Took me a minute to figure it out. I was about to ask about the repetition, when I noticed its reversal theme. Quite ingenious.
Pandit Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Very clever write, Mike.
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 2:05 PM
very nice. I like how it reverses!
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