Bare Foot Joey Mcphearson

my buddy John's Bertram a wood antique
I fixed the engines while he varnish teak
so there we were Joe, John, and Kelly
with a cooler packed with bait so smelly

early in the morning waz headin out the creek
big blue marlin we'ze goin to seek
40 miles past the thirty fathom curve
dropping lines for the bait we serve

John watched the lines Kinda like a cop
we had two on the bottom and 4 on top
did everything me'z could do with me'z fishin power
then John grabbed the hook up on the 3rd hour

all of a sudden it looked like a good day
when the Blue jumped we said "marlin on the way!"
the fish was pulling, screeming out line
"hurry! get John in the harness on time!"

"oh man! the stories we'll tell on the way"
"only if you get that fish in today!"

myself, Joey and Kelly, we placed our bet
while John was cranking,"I'm covered in sweat!"
there we were just having a laugh 
as Joe leened over 1 hand on the gaff

the marlin came up threw Joe's chest with it's spear
then the line popped and they both....dis..apeared
.......................
we tried hard to find our friend in trouble

...............................
looking a long time without even a bubble
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......................................
....................................
.."why didn't I grab Joe! I'm just a Fool"
we didn't go home, till low on fuel
it was hard to tell Joes wife about the fack
that Davey Jones took em and won't give him back

In memmory of Barefoot Joe McPhearson 1963-1996

by Joey's best friend Capt Mike

ps I want to say thank you to my readers and I read all your 
comments and love then all. I am sorry I don't comment back
much. I am a boat mechanic and am very busy this time of year
how ever I can't wait till next winter so I can talk to all of readers.
now stay tuned for the next episode "The Soulmate" which not a
lovey dovey poem but a gut bustin laugh of my the exwives and 
all of my sailboats that I ran away from them on. to be posted 
monday morning for your enjoyment! Capt. Mike!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/20/2011 4:01:00 PM
Dear Mike, Poor Barefoot Joe! Did he get consumed by an undertoe? Nice story and great flow....love the dialect used throughout. Enjoy your busy season at work, and when the winter comes round and you slow down...you can take the place of the poets who plow snow. ( ha ha. ) Blessings and be safe! Gwendolen
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