Barbed Wire Ballad

Rusted wire against a tree
Year by year recedes
Inside of the circling bark, invisibly
Consumed. Relentlessly, the oak tree feeds.

The countless rings of outer bark
Enwrap the wire within.
Thus Time is absorbing me. I mark
The circles choking me.  I’m taut, stretched thin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 28, 2009 at 8:09 PM
really great poem here!...i grew up on an old farm and this is a constant sighting that i used to often see all through the woods ... i am stuck in college now but i cant picture it perfectly with this description!...Luke
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