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Barack Obama

It's Barack Obama's time to shine
for the Inaguration of 2009

Many people have come to see
how Barack Obama has changed for thee

He made it happen for me and you 
to change the world for all to view

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Chris Yarnell

Date: 3/27/2009 3:01:00 PM

my favorite by you by far th best ive seen by you keep it up

Janetta Harrington

Date: 2/27/2009 3:51:00 AM

lovely poem. i voted for him. i get so angry when everyone is picking, picking. lets support out boys and girls that are dying. how about we cooperate as a unified nation. janetta

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/25/2009 6:28:00 PM

Keep your fingers crossed. He inheited the presidency with the country in a shambles. We need to unite behind him and the idiots in Washington need to work with him rather than fight his every move. God Bless. Vince

Michael Perritano

Date: 2/24/2009 7:26:00 PM

you got to be kidding me at least give the man time to fail before you praise his success. He's been in office one month you make him sound like a prophet.

Lawrence Ingle

Date: 2/24/2009 1:29:00 PM

Not yet, but he's working on it. We'll have see, considering what all he's up against. The only real chance of a forever needed change is when Jesus Christ comes to change things back to the way his and our Heavenly Father originally wanted it to be, like in the garden of Eden before Adam and Eve sinned and caused imperfection due to their disobedience. I just hope there isn't some trigger happy nut out their waiting for the right chance to make a name for himself. Thanks for sharing L..in Lou.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/19/2009 8:36:00 PM

Beautiful write, This is a time for all of us to shine. I never dreamed this time would ever come, I cried so much on that wonderful historic day.. I hope and pray this economy gets turned around for the better. Just pray he will remain safe and sound because not everyone feels as we do.. Keep him up in prayer!! Nicely done, God Bless*Tyesha

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/18/2009 1:52:00 PM

lets just hope it happens too. john

Anna Mayall

Date: 2/17/2009 11:07:00 AM

wow...nice poem i loved it

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 7:18:00 PM

Welcome to PS and congrats on the hot list..............Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/14/2009 7:10:00 PM

Stunning material Christina!! It is definitely time for him to shine. -Boo

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/14/2009 6:58:00 PM

Congrats on the hot list. Nice couplet and welcome to the soup. Tyler

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/14/2009 5:49:00 PM

Glad he won! Hopefully things will improve for all of us - as you say it is his time to "shine". Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2009 12:49:00 AM

Nic tribute Christina.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/13/2009 9:20:00 PM

YAY for you and well deserved! Keep up the great work! Love, Shar

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/13/2009 6:38:00 PM

Remarkable work Christina....I agree it's his time to shine. DN

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/13/2009 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on making the hot list. I am so proud of you and keep up the good work..............Nice

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/13/2009 3:28:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. You have an excellent couplet written here. I never thought I would see a black president but I am fortunate that I have. I think he will be a great leader. ~Caramel

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/13/2009 3:23:00 PM

Wonderful poem, I think he will do well. You chose a great muse for today. Love Elizabeth

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2009 3:18:00 PM

Christina, I share your faith in our new president and I'm glad I lived to see the first African-American elected to our nation's highest office. God bless, Carolyn