Bantu the Form

A sea mist rolls inshore this morning
The optician proposes a cataract op

BANTU an imagist couplet Each line a compete idea,the 2nd however constrasts with a complementary description or explanation or metaphor thereof
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 7:14 PM
Quite interesting!
Strand Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 2:02 AM
Cheers Kim,have a creative weekend
Gauthier Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Great example, Brian. Enjoyed.
Strand Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Cheers Line,have a creative weekend,and your faithful support to my contests here is much valued
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