Bantu Poem, Shahiri Mussabwa 3

A man is  sick 
And she tells him"
If you eat this middle sugar cane, 
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You will encrease energy 
And go to work 
Tomorrow." 

      April 26/ 2023
By Alfonso Warally Ngengethe 
     Mussabwa Chris

Message: 
Beside pure honey, 
There is no a tree or fruit
Which is so sweet 
Than Sugar cane. 
If a Bantu woman reffers 
Herself as middle Sugar can or sugar, 
She means a lot about herself
 Physically 
And spiritually 

1.  She can use her body as first care 
 When a man has fever 
And they don't have some
 tablets in the house.
2. She can be a psychologist 
Of a confused man
3. She can stand with her lover
 In hard times till to overcome
The  challenges. 
4. The middle Sugar cane
 Expressing the sweetest 
Of her privet part 
in romance which every man chase 
And enjoy  the most.

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/26/2023 7:24:00 AM

Your poem is informative Alfonso regarding the ways of a Bantu Woman, Thank you I enjoyed learning. I find other cultures so much more colourful than my own and delight in reading about them. Thank you my friend

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 4/26/2023 8:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for your interest, Your comment is so super We are all enjoying poems of different poets... This is the good of poetry soup... You are welcome...my friend.