Banshee

Try and suck my sunshine,
You crazy black banshee!

You can't wear smiling eyes ,
Your laugh is a pitiful cry ;

Don't think it's easy ,
It's checkerboard confusion ;

Try and take my light ,
The glow cannot be stolen 

It only covers what's real;
All you are is black and broken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rodgers Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Melani, your poem is a powerful anthem of resilience against darkness. Your vivid portrayal of defiance against despair and negativity resonates deeply. The imagery of protecting one's light against the black and broken is incredibly moving. Your words paint a vivid picture of strength and unwavering positivity, showcasing your poetic prowess and ability to inspire. A truly empowering and impactful piece! - Blessings, Daniel
Udaeta Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Have a wonderful day!
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