Bang Bang

Bang! Bang! Thump! Thump!
Went the drums of life
down, down upon your head

Bang your dead! If you
Don’t smarten up
Huh! Huh! Sugar ain’t
What it used to be

Don’t you see, it’ll eventually
catch up and then we’ll see
What’s it gonna be?
Don’t tell me you tried

Cos that’s just no good
I’m tired of the you
should! Cos you know
What?

Bang ! Bang!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Trejo Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Lol. Nice poem
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