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'BANG'

Amidst the sounding voids
I hear a resounding noise I fear
I jump cause I hear: BANG

11/08/17
BY JAMES EDWARD LEE SR.

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Patricia Cresswell

November 8, 2017 at 10:25 AM

These three small lines send me into confusion. It is not that I do not understand the meaning it is that I feel helpless to change the situation. Once again, eyes wide open I stare into the maw of evil and being a good person is not enough. These are the thoughts you have stirred,

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