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For Brian Strand's 1391 Poetry Contest 21 June 2025

bamboos hiku

                  (    )                 
                /    |  \
          *  / *    |     \
     || ^ * // ^  //^ /*              dews on dainty stalks
 *  ||^*  //^ *//  / ^        soft strips of morning sunlight~
    \ ||°^ //^// *  *              green fingers strum chimes 
    \ ||° //^//^// /*
   ^ ^\ // //  // /^
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Alhemaidy Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 6:17 AM
Hello JCB Brul :-) Beautiful poem! Have a wonderful day, with best regards and blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Very nice and congrats on the win
Goldsmith Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 10:24 AM
What a creative "bamboos hiku" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a weekend writing away...............
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