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Ballroom Delights

Ballroom Delights We are swept in the whirl of gowns twirling around In the glow of glass lights shining down from each wall While I dance with his hand holding mine, the sweet sound Of the music brings joy to my heart held in thrall. My silk gown flows with glistening colors of blue And I see other ladies in pink and soft white While the lights from above accent folds that imbue Like soft colors of petals in moonglow at night. As we dance on the floor that reflects like a pond The soft shadows of couples revolve like pale ghosts Every sway and each turn move with grace to respond To the magical music enjoyed by their hosts. Up above I now see the most brilliant of glows— Chandelier, like a burst of bright sun rays, hangs high On the ceiling above, arced, with paintings, it shows Luminescence that captures my heart with a sigh. The tall mirrors reflect this most glorious scene As I dance with my lover in graceful wide turns The charm doubles the beauty of all that is seen… While the music plays on…I get lost in return To my feelings of why I am here this sweet night As his arm holds me tighter, to closer embrace My heart beats with the magic of love’s warm delight… We are swept in the whirl of our hearts interlaced. Sandra M. Haight Ballroom Delights ~1st Place~ Contest: Ballroom Delights Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Judged: 12/16/2014 ~1st Place~ Contest: One Of Your Best Sponsor: Rob Carmack Judged: 01/07/2016
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Arnone Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Beautiful ball, Sandra, and superbly written verse. However, if the floor reflects like a pond, you may be seeing more than dresses (ha, ha). ;-)
Haight Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Ha, Ha, Tom...you are correct...just trying to be poetic!! Thank you for the nice comment. Sandra
A  Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "SEIZE THE DAY." Celebrate with me. WUV **SKAT**
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January 13, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
Merryman Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and so detailed! I can close my eyes and picture the scene. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Thank you, Kim. I loved working on this "waltz" rhythm. I appreciated your supportive comments and congrats so much. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:41 AM
Hi Sandra. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Thank you so much Teddy! Sandra
Selfa Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Thank you! Your visit and congrats are much appreciated. Sandra
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January 8, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Sandra, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Thank you again, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Tor Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Very nice win Sandra congratulations!
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Thank you, Michael! Much appreciated. Sandra
Muzzey Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Sandra, you have penned such a beautiful write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. I really enjoyed the read~Caryl
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Hi Caryl, thank you so much for your visit and lovely comments and congrats. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Flows so beautifully! Many congrats. From Jean
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Thank you, Jean. I appreciate your visits and postitive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Mmm... Romantic! Congrats on your placement, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Thank you, Balveen. I love working with this meter! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Hope you are well, enjoying your nice replies ((regarding the bottom reply))
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Hi Linda, I am good, thank you! I appreciate your nice visits and supportive comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
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December 26, 2014 at 9:32 PM
SANDRA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. So nice of you to stop by with your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
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December 17, 2014 at 10:26 AM
A splendid and terrific write Sandra. Big congrats on your win! Hugs
Haight Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Thank you so much, Cecilia! So nice of you to stop by with your encouraging comment. Sandra
Richards Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Simply lovely, we can almost close our eyes, and hear the music !! Congratulations on your win!!
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:58 PM
Hi Carrie, thank you so much for your nice comment and congratulations. It was really a fun poem to work on! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations on your win,Sandra beautiful poem. Bless you
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Hi Eve, thank you for your nice comment and congratulations! I really appreciate it. Sandra
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:17 PM
congratulations Sandra on your win ,very nicely penned
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Robert, thank you so much! Sandra
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:53 PM
This a jewel of great value and I am happy that the judge did this beauty a great honour,congrats on the win Sandra...huggs
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:58 PM
Kayod5, thanks so much for your support and congratulations! I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:23 PM
I am so pleased to share the podium with you and Jan Sandra. I couldn't congratulate you fast enough I was so excited. I don't know how I missed this but it is spectacular. 7+fav.
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Thank you Brenda, you beat me to it! Very exciting for sure for you, Jan and me to be at the top of the list! Thanks for your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:47 AM
we share the podium! many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much! So pleased to share the podium with you and Brenda! Hugs, Sandra
Zerbst Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:38 AM
I am very pleased by the anapest meter combined with such exquisite detail and beautiful imagery. Could not be anything but top-notch!
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Isaiah, it was a pleasure to enter your contest and to achieve such a high spot on your winner's list. I really enjoyed working on this poem! Thanks you so much. Sandra
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November 18, 2014 at 2:37 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. All the best for contest. TFS
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Ravi, thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comments and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:56 PM
This should dance it's way into the Judges heart. Well done!
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Once again, Richard, thank you! Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:10 PM
this is AWESOME. I tried to capture that waltzing beat too but i did reverse of anapestic (can't think what we call it but I believe it was the other one he said to try and use) Yours is THE best because not only did you capture all the wonderful images in the picture but you used that awesome meter!
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Your poem was wonderful too. Somehow, PS has removed my "Poet's Notes" section (even though I am a Premium Member and have used that function) and my pictures over some poems have disappeared, including the one of the ball. Emailed the help address - hope they fix it soon. Again, thanks so much for your positive comment. Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:30 PM
absolutely beautiful Sandra good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Hi Jan, thanks for your encouraging comment and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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