Ballet

Magical flower spirits dance across in wonderment
Wine coloured eyes gleam with secret desire mysterious, fiery
Graceful fluid movement effortlessly pull the heart strings

artsijo

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Audrey Haick

June 3, 2011 at 9:05 AM

Beautiful, Tahera! Congratulations on your fine 3rd Place win. A delight to read as usual. Hope all is well. Thanks for the comments. Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

June 1, 2011 at 6:08 PM

TAHERA.!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in RICKS contest:-) I'm glad you where among all hIS chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

June 1, 2011 at 10:10 AM

Many congrats Tahera on notching up third spot in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Jack Horne

June 1, 2011 at 8:15 AM

Many congrats, Tahera : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 1, 2011 at 6:30 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

May 31, 2011 at 7:04 PM

such lovely imagery. this is one i had completely missed I think.Glad I got to see it today and high in the winners' circle. A big congratulations for your imaginative sijo!

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 31, 2011 at 6:33 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Tahera

Carrie Richards

May 31, 2011 at 4:02 PM

A beauty this is, Tahera! Congratulations!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 31, 2011 at 3:55 PM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your top spot win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo luv.. enjoy..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 30, 2011 at 3:05 AM

so does your sijo, Tahera I love how you describe them as "flower spirits" -- beautiful entry if for the contest & I hope it places high-- congrats again on being a PM-- I just read your first blog here I believe --sorry I missed out reading it since I wasn't logging into the Soup during that time-- stay beautiful! Congrats again on your PM :) hugs

Carolyn Devonshire

March 28, 2011 at 3:51 PM

I can just see the floers dancing in the breeze, Tahera. What a creative analogy comparing them to ballet dancers! A lovely sijo, dear. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2011 at 8:14 AM

Just lovely, Tahera....soft and flowing...love it!

Nette Onclaud

March 28, 2011 at 8:00 AM

utterly graceful bith in content and form, tahera... winning wishes to you! :) huggs

Poet Tacito

March 28, 2011 at 7:20 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Tahera.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2011 at 5:11 AM

Your words have immersed me into the photo so beautifully.. lines of great imagery and description depicting the photo for the contest.. good luck Tahera my friend.. awesome as always..luv..