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Ballerina

shivering with cold
up in the sky there I see
snowflakes about to debut

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Joe Inka

January 28, 2011 at 11:24 AM

Thanks you for changing my perspective. Shovling the driveway will be a little easier to bare now that ive read your elegant description.

Daver Austin

January 25, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Like a scene from The Nutcracker. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 25, 2011 at 7:19 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Norika. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 23, 2011 at 4:23 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. luv..

Carol Fillmore

January 13, 2011 at 9:56 AM

you have a real gift for haiku, my friend!!! Carol

Jimmy Anderson

January 11, 2011 at 7:05 PM

Nice Haiku...I can see them dancing...Jimmy

Poet Destroyer A

January 11, 2011 at 7:51 AM

A wonderful haiku, Noriko.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 11, 2011 at 7:24 AM

Wonderful metaphor you have worded for snowflakes, Noriko

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 11, 2011 at 6:20 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. so full of great imagery... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..