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Ballerina

shivering with cold up in the sky there I see snowflakes about to debut

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Joe Inka

Date: 1/28/2011 11:24:00 AM

Thanks you for changing my perspective. Shovling the driveway will be a little easier to bare now that ive read your elegant description.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/25/2011 10:14:00 AM

Like a scene from The Nutcracker. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Norika. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2011 4:23:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. luv..

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/13/2011 9:56:00 AM

you have a real gift for haiku, my friend!!! Carol

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/11/2011 7:05:00 PM

Nice Haiku...I can see them dancing...Jimmy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2011 7:51:00 AM

A wonderful haiku, Noriko.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/11/2011 7:24:00 AM

Wonderful metaphor you have worded for snowflakes, Noriko

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2011 6:20:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. so full of great imagery... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

Anthony Nutter

Date: 1/11/2011 3:01:00 AM

Snow falling through the sky still captivates the audience as does this haiku.