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Ballerina

shivering with cold up in the sky there I see snowflakes about to debut

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/28/2011 11:24:00 AM
Thanks you for changing my perspective. Shovling the driveway will be a little easier to bare now that ive read your elegant description.
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:14:00 AM
Like a scene from The Nutcracker. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Norika. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:23:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. luv..
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:56:00 AM
you have a real gift for haiku, my friend!!! Carol
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:05:00 PM
Nice Haiku...I can see them dancing...Jimmy
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:51:00 AM
A wonderful haiku, Noriko.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:24:00 AM
Wonderful metaphor you have worded for snowflakes, Noriko
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:20:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. so full of great imagery... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 1/11/2011 3:01:00 AM
Snow falling through the sky still captivates the audience as does this haiku.
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