Dominic Magofna Poet Ballad

"ballad of Dreams"

Oh sweetest stars, sing remedies
show me where my life will go
show me all those paths unknown
Until the morning star shall rise

Oh sweetes stars, sing remedies
lead my true love onto me
show me where our hearts will be
until the morning star shall rise

oh sweetest stars, sing remedies
turn this reality into a fantasy
where I am careless and so free
until the morning star shall rise

oh sweetest stars, sing remedies
show me when the lights go out
what my days were all about
until the morning star shall rise.

oh sweetest stars, sing remedies
oh! Jubilant scenes of mockery!
how bad i wish to be reality
until the morning star shall rise

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Sara Kendrick December 12, 2010 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on your Ballad being featured on home page..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2010 at 8:54 AM Congratulations Dominic on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Sylvia Coulstock December 5, 2010 at 3:22 PM This is lovely and gentle and yet there is depth to your words.I liked it very much,also I found it soothing.Very nice and worthy to be on the feature page.Congratulations.Love June(Sylvia)

Simon Cartlidge December 5, 2010 at 3:09 PM beautifully written, leaves a real sense of speaking to the deepest part of the soul, like these are words the heart has known for eternity. fantastic work - Simon