Ballad: Dawn To Dusk

The black beyond gives way to light, 
starting the early show,
in which horizon all ablaze 
from arc of yellow glow.

Aloft, white satin veil reflects, 
but half-lit ground a blur,
as it awaits a warming breeze 
to make the thin grey stir.

Soon eye of day takes centre stage, 
the leading part to play.
Colour, birdsong and fine perfume 
bring life to new born day.

On thermal rise there rides white flock, 
a major vapour show,
that on the top is brightest fleece 
in contrast to below,

where it is one dull leaden mass 
which makes us ill at ease,
for it does hold the forecast threat 
– precipitate release. 

Elsewhere the eye is still on stage 
and actors on the scene.
Cumulus, stratus and cirrus, 
a grand show to be seen.

Some hours on from noon they rest, 
then closing of the eye,
when light is forfeit to the dusk 
and return of black sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/24/2021 10:49:00 AM
Hello Tony Hargreaves, I like the way you described the dawn. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:08:00 AM
Hi. Thanks for your comment. I love to watch the dawn now that we have the sunny morn. The clouds, the colours, are magic. They announce the joy of a new day being born. Best wishes.
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