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08/05/23

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Contest by Eve Roper.

Baling Hay

BALING  HAY

                We three are farmer girls primarily.
                named as Alice, Linda and Emily.
                belonging to same peasant family
               of almost same age holding simile.
               All of us work hard  in field merrily.
            
               We hold skill to cut, chop and collect hay.
               We are performing throughout the whole day.
               Working under open sky and  Sun rays.
               Enjoying work staying cheerful and gay.
               Panorama touching horizon gray.

              Linda standing as her bundle is done.
              Emily holds bunch on shoulder in fun.
              Me Alice, baling to finish my turn.
              Since childhood ' Baling hay', we are to learn.
             Farmhouse close by: At eve, we rush, run.

            We are close friends, being cousin sisters.
            Not rock STAR but shine as Bailing Hay STAR.
            Expert to bind bunch of  hay in cluster.
            We do job fast, yet try to do faster.
            We enjoy festive days during Easter.
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Alex Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:48 PM
A beautiful rhyme on the three little girls. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thank you for your creative poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Eve
Poet Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.
Meadows Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 10:45 PM
Short and sweet. It's a lovely poem.
Dutta Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Thank you Jeanette. Blessings.
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