Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Bali On My Waiting List

Was it a fantasy?
Seashore breeze on caught
Live on a dream

Did I slept yesterday?
 'Cause the view was stunned
Stunned in Bali

Was it just fantastic?
Footprints on damped sand
Welcoming peace

Can I just be extend?
Bali is too great
But I leave soon

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Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2013 at 2:33 PM Just a note to say hello and wish you the most amazing weekend.

Harry Horsman December 22, 2012 at 1:18 AM have a wonderful time...this is awesome.... Yanny Widjanarko December 22, 2012 at 5:05 AM Thanks Harry have a wonderful holiday too for you and your family :D wishing you a peace and wonderful Merry Christmas :D - hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2012 at 5:17 PM yanny, I can see you are loving Bali. Are you there right now?? How exciting if you are. Very nice! Yanny Widjanarko December 20, 2012 at 5:20 PM Yes Andrea I just arrived last night, and today the adventure begin, too bad i cannot share some pictures in here, later if I have a good pictures i will share it into my blog and I will let you know :D

Sara Kendrick December 19, 2012 at 5:55 PM Sounds like a great place to visit..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Yanny Widjanarko December 19, 2012 at 7:02 PM Thanks Sara, enjoy your holiday too :D-hug, yanny

Susan Palli December 19, 2012 at 12:39 AM Very nice! Yanny Widjanarko December 19, 2012 at 12:42 AM Thanks Susan, glad that you like it :D -hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux December 18, 2012 at 5:31 PM Excellent attempt, Soup mail.