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Bali On My Waiting List

Was it a fantasy? Seashore breeze on caught Live on a dream Did I slept yesterday? 'Cause the view was stunned Stunned in Bali Was it just fantastic? Footprints on damped sand Welcoming peace Can I just be extend? Bali is too great But I leave soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2013 2:33:00 PM
Just a note to say hello and wish you the most amazing weekend.
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Date: 12/22/2012 1:18:00 AM
have a wonderful time...this is awesome....
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/22/2012 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Harry have a wonderful holiday too for you and your family :D wishing you a peace and wonderful Merry Christmas :D - hug, yanny
Date: 12/20/2012 5:17:00 PM
yanny, I can see you are loving Bali. Are you there right now?? How exciting if you are. Very nice!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/20/2012 5:20:00 PM
Yes Andrea I just arrived last night, and today the adventure begin, too bad i cannot share some pictures in here, later if I have a good pictures i will share it into my blog and I will let you know :D
Date: 12/19/2012 5:55:00 PM
Sounds like a great place to visit..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/19/2012 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Sara, enjoy your holiday too :D-hug, yanny
Date: 12/19/2012 12:39:00 AM
Very nice!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/19/2012 12:42:00 AM
Thanks Susan, glad that you like it :D -hug, Yanny
Date: 12/18/2012 5:31:00 PM
Excellent attempt, Soup mail.
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