Get Your Premium Membership

Balcony

BALCONY Leaning over deep and dark, dreaming far from land. Sound waves cure my heart. hourglass harbors shore’s sand. The sea sparkles with pirate’s gold, true treasure cosseted down under. Winsome whales and shark eyes cold, i glory in God’s ocean of wonder. I slide my palm upon the salty rail, lean in and listen, to the Spirit’s whisper. I see all of life stretched out fine and frail. Fresh wind infused, within my soul, to transfer - heavenbound, from ship to sailing sky. Emotions felt profoundly in this open space, My sea green eyes doth travel far and wide, low and high. I can see forever, in our Creator's deep blue grace. 5/29/2017
1st Place/Standard Brian Strand's June Standard Contest 1st Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/31/2017 7:34:00 PM
congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2017 7:53:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 5/30/2017 7:25:00 AM
This was beautiful Kim, perhaps a little dark and a lot deep, it still hold a beauty all its own.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things