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Balancing Scales

The light is On Mr.LightOn...
Square flight is On.Ms.ing
nothing.goes wrong Ms.ong
no missing Long.when the
Count came On.Mr.LightOn.
Ms.Long.Sang.Songs...
Ford;Perfectly & twisted;

adventurefriendshipi do not know?

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Denis Joe

July 11, 2009 at 11:59 AM

This has all the feel of Edith Sitwell’s Facades. This is a great use of language and recognition that each syllable is like a note in music. This could get dismissed as nonsense but that would be quite criminal. Meaning (if and when it exists) is the last thing to look for in a poem. The reader should approach a poem as they would approach a vase. Once agreement has been reached on the beauty of the vase only then can they decide what goes in it.

Charmaine Chircop

July 10, 2009 at 4:32 AM

the letter O-loves her and he sings for her better than Enrique Inglesias:-)--his light on fire perfectly and twisted -great abstract poem--well penned--charM ING--SMILE

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