Balance

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My balance is off, I am reeling Last week fragile cord-walking worked This week the cord is slippery And the feet I do not feel slide away I try, I try hard, I try harder My body slowly recovers but my mind My mind. I'm sitting in my bed And hold my head, it's heavy Being a cord dancer needs energy That is not there. I need to sleep And will plug in my recharchable me Will take a small break till it says 100%

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2016 4:06:00 PM

You have been through a lot my friend - rest get your strength and when you have the energy we need to talk about the wedding dresses lol l:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2016 10:08:00 PM

Thanks Jan :) We most certainly need energy for the dresses :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2016 2:42:00 PM

Keep getting stronger Darren...excellent verse

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2016 2:45:00 PM

Thank you, Tim!