Balance

Balance  

     The balance is skewed
     well beyond a friendly thumb
     count me out for now


             GINSU-KNIFE   EASTPORT,  MAINE  USA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Levasseur Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 7:47 AM
I do not understand why words, written as prose, can still be considered poetry. I guess I am a staunch traditionalist in that sense. Quite brutal this piece.
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March 6, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Rob, rereading your remark brought back to me the fact that I dont understand the difference either. Thanks for not letting me get too complacent. Ive got much to learn. Cheers Patrick
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