Bait

dragged to his ruin ravening fish came to eat - floating bait of meat. Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE V,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/2/2020 10:03:00 PM

Can't help but think what fools fish can be! You'd think their mothers would warn them. No?! LOL. Nice senryu, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 11:34:00 PM

You are still behind the fish.. lol..May be fried fish for dinner.. Thank you Gershon..

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2020 4:34:00 PM

Temptation is often hard to overcome, Jenish...we have to be vigilant and wise! Regards // paul

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 11:32:00 PM

Those who overcome the temptations are wise.. Great words Paul..Thank you..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/2/2020 10:12:00 AM

Really GOOD one, Jenish--reminds me of some people I've known! Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 10:47:00 AM

Thank you Janice.. Your comment decorates my poem..

Rashi Soni

Date: 4/2/2020 7:48:00 AM

Good wordings Jenish, your words are quite powerful.This hooked me, Rashi

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 9:51:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Rashi..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/1/2020 8:35:00 AM

Perfect imagery,tragic story for the fish, happy one for the fisherman. Hugs dear Jenish! xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 8:56:00 AM

Lol..So true..Thanks Demetrios..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2020 1:47:00 AM

Congrats for your HM, Jenish. I think in my poem you just read, I did not make clear what I meant underneath, so I clarified at the top. It was not an April Fool's joke.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 2:01:00 AM

Sorry Andrea.. I was mislead by that last line.. So sorry..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/31/2020 7:12:00 PM

Ooh! You nailed this one, Professor! Or should I say that you 'hooked' it. Superb senryu, Jenish! Peace and Light, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/1/2020 12:08:00 AM

lol... Hooked it.. Thank you Gershon.. Beware... Corona hooking people around.. Don't fall on baits like handshakes, kisses or hugs...lol..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/31/2020 6:53:00 AM

I liked the imagery in your poem, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/31/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...