Baggage

I storm away from our world Leaving baggage of thoughts in the cold And a place within it is for you Our bonds now free to themselves undo The spaces left behind Are like a tide all blind They try to fill this with memories That cannot fill themselves with stories I storm away from our world Leaving baggage of thoughts in the cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anderson-Throop Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 1:39 AM
your passion is evident in your word choice I especially like the lines: They try to fill this with memories That cannot fill themselves with stories" Victoria .
Prabhu Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 2:46 AM
thank you for stopping by and the comments.~ sashi
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